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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 4 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #15 on Jun 29, 2009, 7:16pm »

But Jayfeather can't die either...

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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 4 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #16 on Jun 29, 2009, 7:20pm »

Well...That was kinda the idea but Cinderheart will live for a couple more chapter but now i will have to think of a second cats point of veiw to write from.

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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 5 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #17 on Jun 29, 2009, 7:29pm »

Chapter 5

Jayfeather let out a hoarse cough and blinked open his eyes. He could see.

"Come here, Jayfeather!" A flame-colored to snapped. Firestar!

He padded slowly towards the great leader. "Am I dead?" he asked quizacally.

"Yes! That was your punishment for breaking the warrior code!" Firestar snapped. Jayfeather flinched and took a step back. Firestar was acing way. Two kits walked towards him.

"Hello" Jayfeather said, knowing exactly who the two kits were.

"I'm Robinkit your only son" Said the tom, Robinkit looked exactly like him the same blue eyes, the same tabby pelt.

"I'm Stormkit" the she-cat said and added sadly, "Lighningkit is next."

"But she's innocent" Jayfeather yowled. The two kits looked at him sadly.

"Cinderheart will survive" Robinkit said. The kit looked angry. but sad.

"Lets bring him to the pool and show him the rest of his families fates" Stormkit said her blue eyes lighting up. Jayfeather narrowed his eyes and followed them as they raced away.

After a while, they came to a pool. He saw the fates of all his family. Jayfeather let out an angry yowl. and layed down by the pool to watch every day life in the clans.

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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 4 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #18 on Jun 29, 2009, 7:30pm »

Short chapter, sorry i didnt know how to explain his life in Starclan

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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 5 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #19 on Jun 29, 2009, 7:51pm »

Awesome story! write more! and for a new cats point of veiw you should do Lionblaze's hes my favorite cat besides Feathertail!

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Re: Fox Attack!(Chapter 5 up and Sign-Ups open)
« Reply #20 on Jun 29, 2009, 8:18pm »

Chapter 6

It had been 7 moons after Jayfeather's death and Lightningkit was now Lightningpaw.

"You will go to the gathering tonight" Brackenstar said not meeting Cinderhearts eye.

She let out a whine. "Look at me father" she begged.

"You betrayed your clan!" Brackenstar hissed.

"No, I didnt i have suffered enough! Starclan gave me my punishment when two of my kits died and then Jayfeather died." Cinderheart cried.

"Your my only surviving dauhter, yet, I dont see how i can call you my daughter!" Brackenstar retorted.

"B...b.....but-"She started but was interupted by Sorreltail.

"Let up on her, Brackenstar, she's already suffering!" Sorreltail snapped.

"Fine! But from now on never spek to me unless i speak to you!"Brackenstar hissed at his daughter.

Cinderheart let out a sob and leaned against her mother. Sorrletail licked her ears comfortingly.

"I feel just as bad as you, since Whitepaw and Blizzardpaw are dead!" Icecloud said sadly walking forward.

"I know! But you can always have more kits!"She hissed and raced out of camp, to get fresh air.

"Mother, wait up"Lightningpaw called. She turned around to see her daughter chasing after her. She stopped and waited for her daughter to catch up.

"What is it?" She asked.

"My mentor Brackenstar got mad at me during training for no reason today" Lightnigpaw cried.

"I know, he's just angry at me" Cinderheart said sootingly and licked her daughters ears.

"We better get back to camp since theres a gathering tonight" Lightningpaw said. Cinderheart nodded. The other clans didnt know about her and Jayfeather.

They raced into camp side by side and gathered with the gathering patrol.

"Are we all here?" Brackenstar asked.

"Yes"Cinderheart said. She was still deputy for now.Brackenstar nodded and they all trotted off.

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